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Oh ma Dayum plees playz me a Song.

Posted by beastkid7 - February 3rd, 2010


"Please play me a song"

History ...not history
But it is to me
And maybe also for her
Not a sudden movement but it caught me by surprise
So much attention and that look straight in my eyes
But why, could the motive be a problem deep with in.
A sudden burst of Altruism for witch she maybe might view as kin

Lovely I should of said, I had the confidence to do it
And she had set me up I should have stuck to it
Lovely I should have said, to break the kin thought
And with that statement her feelings I would have bought
But I don't want to buy them ...or maybe just a little
Does she want this, why is she such a riddle

But she isn't complicated I'm just being blind
Were just walking slowly like there's nothing to find
So slick and nonchalant -were both one of a kind

So now I'm falling into something that's not even there
Confusion is all I feel, I swear -Just bright nothingness bursting into air
Leaving me with no choice but to care

But I don't want to care -the feelings and emotion
I just want to know -to understand every notion
The only thing I can do is to take it as it comes
For love blooms at the edge of the branch and can fall by the simple vibration of drums.

Please play a song for me ...preferably on drums.
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Dude I seriously think I can be a creative writer of some sort ...I just need to put more thought into the process. This took me like 5, 7 minutes to write.

what do you think? (wat is it bout)

::EDIT::
This is my attempt at turning myself into a Navi' ...my AVATAR?

Oh ma Dayum plees playz me a Song.


Comments

WAT

Dude - you should totally Rap this shit out!

You ever participated at those modern art galleries, sometimes there's independent poetry recitals.

Which is actually MC's beating out poems on the mike. Halla'

(Reading the poem out loud)

Yeah dude! This could totally work as a Rap Poem. Just beat out the words with that hip hop flare!

And get some music in the background or just some beat-boxers.

lol, I've tried it before. This isn't really that type of poem tho ...maybe a song but not a rap. I could totally try it tho.