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John Murray @beastkid7

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Posted by beastkid7 - July 3rd, 2011


I want to eat your soul... just to know
I'll put it back
I just want to know
because I can feel thos precious wounds growing
shaking the foundation of you
please I must devour you
in order to know what to do

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Vivacious
she was a spirit
Freed ...that is if she was ever trapped at all
Vivacious, dancing in conversation
the sense was off and on
deep and spawning inspiration
an invitation
a mili second of love
is what I will admit

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mellow that shes dying
when shes gone no crying
she ment world to you

then the thought becomes a sickness
she becomes your sickness
a passing flue

its sad how much she ment to you

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The shadows are my liking
the cold is my place
I conceal every utterance
I hide every trace

My blood as grown to warm for this
my brain has changed so
I must shock my self continually
I need to be able to go

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A mind set
an illusion of ability
NOTICED
and it will be broken
KNOW THIS
It will be shattered

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Give me my family back world
what is it you want me to do
bring out my every flaw
make me look a fool

Give back my family world
you have torched them thru and thru
and shoved there minds in a life not kind
and theres so much my body could do

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Damp in vision
heavy head
Spiders still
cold carpet
noisy howl
Quiet shrill
Stuffed with things
dishes lights
dark
no one payed the bill

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I think I could do this forever
write
I do it best when things are off with me
NO!
The best ones I remember
are when every things all better
and my inner can be likened to a calm sea

Bright bursts of air! ^^ haha just good stuff spew when everythings all alright
Oh how I yearn for that again


Comments

D= Daaaaang! thats fuckin good!!

Oh!! ^^ thank you SO much :D

Better than really any I've written.
here's something I did some time back:

All the Hippies and Low lives are walking about
Nobody gives a shit
Nobody has a doubt
Nothing's goin' on
nothing's goin' round
Whatever it is
if it were
it would be going down

aww I love hippies!! :P

If I interpret this right it simply means ....If something BIG was going down, you would be seeing it go down. But you dont, so there isnt.

pretty cool poem!

its pretty good FOR A NOOB!! XD ill write a better one

Its all subjective ...all poetry is good AS LONG AS its from the heart ...the closest it gets to the spirit of a person....the better