4.5 stars because this was beautiful! The texture was not only brilliant, but it was really well done! As well as the colors and the compositions. Clearly your a visual artist before animator, but you play to your strengths well.
- .5 Perhaps it would have been more emotionally affecting if you showed the Wizard doing something lonely in the beginning. It would have driven the story, kept watcher invested, and created a sense of fulfillment when he got his ghostly friend.
lol, I like it :) made me chuckle.
Pretty good for your first animation. Keep practicing you'll get better. Things you might want to consider to make things more interesting are having a shorter intro (people are impatient) and adding sound fx.
yeah, sorry about the intro length. i've removed it from my other animation. thanks for the slightly positive feedback! everybody else hated it XD
aww thats not funny. lol but the animation was alright.
That was halarious man! Was very creative mixing the two rants :D
I liked it!
I really liked the music, the spectacle and the atmosphere. I'm a sucker for existentialism. have to agree with some people on the mellow dramatics though. ..even though, admittedly over dramatizing is actually a decent way of fully getting a point across, I would try a bit more subtlety next time. Funny this line right here--
"your corruption is your fault.
your corruption is your fault.
Not because you could chose not to be corrupt,
but because you have not given up on yourself."
lol thats a very blatant way of putting it. I mean ... the idea isn't to give up on yourself. I agree with it though .. supporting scriptures, very loosely quoted :P. ::Man was not ment to guide his own footsteps ..and Man has dominated man to his own injury.
Also, don't you think Hell is a bit out of character for a god who IS love? Think of it on a scale of infinite burning --to even a man who lived his whole life sinfully. Just close your eyes and scale that for a second. Even our puny man minds can realize the injustice in that. Sides, the word 'Hell' was used to translate several different original text words like Sheol, Hades, and Gehenna. Which all but Gehenna simply means grave ..Gehenna means the grave you won't com back from.
Looking at the reviews and responses. It's sad, the conundrum of different point of views. Two people honestly trying to help each other ..both looking at the other as sadly misguided.
Truth is, what is, not what you want. But, in a negation of perfection(Adam) ...imperfection. What we do want is not what we should want... is not what fulfills us. History proves it, present day proves it. We strive for things of fabricated value and perpetuate our own corruption.
But, alas, this is a review 7/10 because Propaganda is off putting and it was, as mentioned, very rigid, with all the tweening and what not. I liked it though, keep it up!
Lying to a child - little to no consequence
Lying to your boss - lose your job
Lying to your government - pay fine or go to jail
Lying to an eternal God - Eternal Hell
God is love and stands for all things good, so, he must be against all things that are not good.
Thanks for the review ;)
Oh maan dude was that great! The pacing was well done and the plot twist, GODAM! I was like nooo, what, NO! Actually his reaction to her limping in soaked in blood was quite hilarious. "are you okay?" LOL he was a bit nonchalant. But, I loved it all the same, your a great story teller, really!
CANT WAIT for chapter 5!!
is a beast of a man, and this is hilarious as always!
I especially like the way Edwardo communicates with his mates lol
Bring him all the bacon and eggs you have.
That was actually really good
I mean REALLY funny. Like a legit comedy :P I would watch this on t.v. The robot is comedy gold ...like such a great complement to the maine character! Good JOB! I hope to see more :D
THIS is ridicalus!!
I ...with out words. The Atmosphere and the storyline ...its not often that I actually feel ... engrossed ...in a newgrounds animation! ...I love total action adventure epicness of it. NOT only was it a good idea ...but it was well executed.
My only critisism is that the quality wasn't that great, clarity wise. But I enjoyed it!
OH SNAP! available in HD on Youtube I'm there hoe!
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