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John Murray @beastkid7

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Been writing ....AGAIN

Posted by beastkid7 - November 5th, 2010


Say something
mean something
face running
to mean someone

Break it, you broke it
You care too much to say you care
Your stuburness ...instills that fear

Its not funny when you CANT help someone
years set in there ways
Alpha heart to pay

There beginning is there end
emotion to them a trend

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AM I SMARTER CAUSE I DONT THINK I AM
broken to pieces on your casual thoughts
life changing is a simple decision for the flavor
no foresight to all manors of behaviour

Sold out to yourself
type of miniature wealth
and pouted face be me
with cringed eyes you see

but why listen to me
I MEAN REALLY, why listen too me
I thought you were the trusted smart
your role to lead us out of dark

imperfection strikes your mind
just in time, to make her mime

time flies
I hope she'z back

Death of her
all heart attack

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Ooo you tricky freak
all thos deaths bleek
KILT them all with slight of hand
faded it till it was "just a sham"

Blinded be the smartest man
the smartest man to ever live
but wat good is it if take not give
But life forces FORCES wrong on you
Hold it up, STRONG are you

Can I blame the sightless face
all light covered left no trace
when light be what we NEED in side
Instead life sends us to BLEED the ride

Makes life for thos so bleek
Ooo you tricky tricky freak

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I'm going to do what I do
would all to pay attention too
Not the greatest thing
Shock the soul and let it fling

Cringe my mind because it stopped
your all in my bout lets all rock
destination there is no land
don't believe the lies bout sand


Comments

I like the first one, about not being able to reach past someone's shell to really connect to them. I like the others but I don't understand them properly - what is the Tricky Freak one about - it is connected to media manipulation and disinformation ?

Thaanx man! YOUR BACK :D.

1. your exactly right, its about not being able to get someone to understand because of years set in one destructive way.

2. Its my parents. First about my dad, and the way even though were shruggl'n with money. When we come into a certain amount of money. . .he feels for some reason he can start spending like he's not still poor. And you can't really advise your dad ...cause I don't have the "EXP points" to do so. I figure he knew he was doing. Results have shown otherwise. My mom said she'll leave ...for the stupidest reasons. Off into the night she goes. I said "all right mama" as I closed the door behind her ...pretending not to care the slightest. But I thought of how bad we'd all feel if something happend to her.

3. The trick tricky freek::: The bible says "the whole world is lying in the power of the wicked one." And I believe it. How people do not see it ...just look at the ...everything(tv, radio, movies, Government, RELIGION) ....well I don't blame them as I said he has dun such a good job of making Bad look good, dirty look pretty, wrong look right. He Keeps people in the dark. and your exactly right, in media, if you'll notice it is a rare thing that something that teaches good values and true happiness ever gets up there. Wich would in effect ...make people happy. Instead he preys on our weaknesses sex, drugs, and money. All leading to temporary happiness. Bur yet some people make it there life. Wich must suck. But how can I blame them ...when you don't believe in anything better than this world what is there else to look for the pleasure, exitment, and self indulgmence. This is what the world promotes, this is how the "tricky freak blinds them.

4. this one comes off the 3rd. "what is there to do when you don't believe theres anything better." I guess the ocean is metaphoric for "the world" and land for Stability, knowing there is a God. "Shock the soul and let it fling" -he's gonna live his life to "the full." Temporary pleasures. "Not the greatest thing" you kinda get a sense that he himself knows and is kinda depressed but set in his ways. But he gets people to follow him anyways ...eventually drowning with him. essentially pulling off EXACTLY what satan wants to do with the whole world. I also get sense in this poem ...that though there supposed to be doing something. they don't seem to be going anywhere.

Wow that got real deep real fast. Did not expect to write that much. I guess the poems are condensed version of big thoughts.