That's the thing about poetry: you may not like what you wrote, but someone else does! The first poem was quite visceral, the second (just as good) a bit more pointed.
I'm starting to believe we're all sharing each others thoughts, from across the globe. Check this out, and tell me it's not creepy http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1348593/2
I'm telling you man, I think Jordan's got it right... all those ancient, mysterious structures across the globe might just be an old mental-internet infrastructure, to share knowledge. Can't tell you how many times I get farting around here, then flip to the FP to find someone just commented :|
beastkid7
eh whatever.. lol