Percentage done: 30%
I got my laptop back so nows I can start crank'n out my Spark-boy* movie again!
O.k. so JakBaronKing was talking to sherockachild22 about writeing and said,"My English Teacher in College once told me that some of the greatest writers practice what he likes to call "Intellectual Masturbation"
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LOL - Yeah...so don't worry about what you write...just write. It does so much for the human spirit and mind."
so I figured I just write ... I mean I'm Just going to write something anything- I'm gona wigg it. But I'm gona just start at the exiting part, I know how important the "build" is in a storey but ...I don't feel like it.
I stood firmly planted on the ground, thick fog surrounding me. I stood there shifting my metal plated shoes in the dirt. Metal plated for no reason I thought, thinking of how light my shoes were. My jacket was also plated with light metal over black canvas textured clothes. A tazer gun in one hand and a sword on my back Just in case. I really didn't want to use it ... couse they wanted him alive, the bounty was for 20,000 and the wanted him alive. I've been standing here for about 5 minutes now, feels like 15. The fog started to clear.This is were he was supposed to be in the middle of a Ortech city, Ernst. Ernst! yeah thats his name, sounds tough don't it. Probably some small skinny kid who said the wrong things to the wrong people.
That made me confident, too confident. couse one moment I felt an swift pound on my side and the next I was on the floor looking at what seemed to be a tall beastly man running straight for me on a semi-distant building. I must of flew 12 yards, I estimated on account of I blacked out for a second. I got up quickly and realized my tazer gun had flew out my grip. I pulled out 4 charged blades and whisked them in his direction. Skidding to a stop He put his huge arm up- TINK TING. FREck! only 2 hit, note to self "practice aiming."
As he was standing right in front of me and the sun breaking through the clouds reflected off his arm I realized he was a cyborg. He toward over me twice my height. I think I'm gona have to use my sword I thought.
- To be continued . . . maybe, if guys like were this improvisation is going.
its pretty funny ...I deleted my last post by a mistake (don't ask me how) and I tried to recreated it.
I waz so happy I got my computer back, I drew this picture. *the orange haired dude is Spark- Boy
JakBaronKing
I really look forward to your upcoming flash.
Especially if Red Baron will make another appearance.
LOL - I know my English prof. is a bit enigmatic. But he's right. All you have to do is just write.
Remember those old Snoopy Cartoons....
"It was a dark and stormy night..."
and he would observe the FIRST sentence over and over and over again...and nothing is agreeing with him.
Just...write whatever you want...a whole NOVEL if you can. Then rough-draft it and edit.
You'd be surprised what you come up with.
beastkid7
Why is every thing red. , , CHINA, huh
A whole novel? you know I did that once when I was 9, but it was random and based off of all the shows I watched then, DBZ and and final fantacy.
Its actually pretty funny when I read it. It has no definit plot or characterization. I gave the characters any powers they needed at the time.
But I know if I wrote one now it would be pretty good.