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been writeing. FLAMMING DEAD WORRIERS AND AMBIENT PAINS

Posted by beastkid7 - November 24th, 2009


Heart ache

For no reason I found
I feel such painful pound
And ambient feeling of death
Or yearning for it at best
Its almost too much to take
Is this what it feels like to heart ache
When your in love but you have to stay away
But you see her beauty everyday.

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I had to write a myth that teaches a lesson for mythology class -guess what the lesson is

Honor

There is a world beyond death. A place the gods made were those who lived a life of honor live once again. Though he never really died, he just laid there under the ground half-consciously angry at the world ...at he who betrayed him. So filled with rage that he could not yet die. His name was General Tie and five years ago he and his family were killed. They were killed by Emperor Gin.It is un-honorable to kill a man caught off guard and more so a man of the military. The emperor said it was a result of a minor enemy invasion. Tie was the only one that knew. He figured it was an act of jealousy because he was considered the most skilled warrior in kearon and that Gin was the most skilled second only to General Tie. Tie was Chief instructor for the best military recruits, he knew countless fighting styles and had created many all his own. But most of his time was spent with his family. Oh how he loved his family. He had a son and a wife.

Thinking of his family only fueled his anger as he laid there beneath the earth day after day. He was buried out side the emperor's castle with all the other fallen worriers. The tomb stones were hardly visible as the fog was thick near the ground. But it was that night that General Tie's anger burned so deep that he regained command over his limbs and dug his way to the surface. He through himself out of the whole, on to what seemed to be damp cold dirt. He could not feel a thing. As he got up the dirt sifted through his bones and the military robe was buried in. His robe was blue but tarnished by the erosion of damp dirt making it a more rustic color. Ripped and torn the robe only partially covered his almost fully decade body. But he did not stand like a dead man, he stood like a general. He cracked his head towards the emperor's castle with only vengeance on his mind.

He dashed through the grave splitting the fog that reached up to his waist. Tie gained on the Guards in front of the large brick wall surrounding the castle. But he came only to kill one man. So before he became anything more than a faded silhouette in the fog he leaped into the air. Gliding above the guards and cutting through the winds until he landed on top of the wall shattering the bricks beneath him. Unfortunately his presence was made known and the guards came out of there stations. He stood on the broad brick surface as the guards came in from both sides. They charged him only to be met by stiff blocks and swift throws. Tie swayed back and forth with ease creating a dance of counters and strikes that sent men flying every which way. The master of fighting technique took care not to kill his brothers -the ones in witch he trained. Even those with weapons he would disarm them sending the swords and knives into brick. Tie turned his head in the direction of the castle to see what lit the night sky and all he saw were three arrows coursing through the sky at great speeds. Aimed accurately they made impact in less than seconds. He fell to the ground burning. For a short while the guards watched the large fire his body made.

Then there eyes widened as general Tie got up his whole body crackling from the fire. No one dared touch him then, he was a fear inspiring site. He stood on top of the wall as the only source of light other then the castle. He lunged off the wall plummeting to the brick path leading to the castle. He landed breaking all the royal busts and statutes as he made impact. He made his way to and through the castle, no one even tried to stop him. Then as he walked into the planning room he saw emperor Gin standing there scared -but standing with pride. The emperor was wearing a blue robe lined with red and adorned in badges of all sorts. As Tie pulled out his sword Gin notices his face, though burning and decayed he could never forget that face. As soon as he had realized Gins face shrunk back into a face of fear and amazement, then preparing him self for what was to come next. As Tie pulled out a sword to the emperor's neck a little boy walked in along with his mother. The emperors family. At that second General Ties flames vanished as they reminded him of his family. Thinking deeply about his family he withdrew the sword from the emperors neck and accepted death for rage had clouded his judgment. General Tie dispersed into sand flying out the entrance to the grave yard leaving only the sword burnt gold by his undead flames. The Emperor's face hardened in respect for him and hung the golden sword up for all to see. General Tie was the most skilled fighter second to none and the most honorable because he chose to do right when it was much easier to do wrong. It is un-honorable to kill a man caught off guard and more so a man of royalty. So there is a world beyond death. A place the gods made were those who lived a life of honor live once again. A place were family is found and were warriors come for peace.


Comments

Cheer up dude. I know what it's like....

But you gotta stop being so hung up on one girl, cause you lose sight at all the other ladies that all want to be you.

You gotta be more chill, let things just be natural. You give your best shot, and you may not be successful. But don't be all depressed. That's not the heart of a hero.

You my main man, are a hero. You express it through your stories.

But you still gotta keep your cool. And always have the heart.

If you and her truely match, she'll see it. And who knows, you might be only interested in her looks.

Real relationships start to show when you truely know a person. Truely.
like. your actually reading her personality.

And you gotta ask yourself. Do I really want to be with a girl who behaves like this? Or thinks like this?

Trust me...that bodacious booty won't be botacious when you two grow up together.

Looks are just part of the relationship.

You gotta stop sweating and just be cool. You won't know if your really into this girl unless you know her as a person from her heart and soul.

Trust me....hot girls can have the NASTIEST personalities.

Like...What a bitch!....personalities.

My advice....don't sweat it dude.

But if you feel stressed....just do some pushups.

Trust me...the adrenaline rush makes you less depressed about anything.

Which is why I encourage healthy eating and exercise all the time.

And don't forget to draw, spend time with the family, fuck...PRAY.

EVERY DAY.

Just don't lose yourself dude.

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MOTIVATION!!!!!!
(Well...not really, but it might cheer you up)

Tribute
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=suXpucoTWNY">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=suXpuc oTWNY</a>

The Metal
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cBtjSHm3ZH0">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cBtjSH m3ZH0</a>

Many women lie and are quite controversial with the logic of loving someone for who they are. This episode clip is quite the example.
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wEGFsukl124">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wEGFsu kl124</a>

Sheesh, it's really hard to find someone decent these days. So don't be too hard on yourself broham. Just be cool.

God Hand theme song
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vAga2AjfZlg">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vAga2A jfZlg</a>

Fav. Viewtiful Joe Episode - Joe discovers his Hero Speech
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6x7nWpO9Go">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z6x7nW pO9Go</a>

Fav. Storm Hawks episode - Finn can ROCK!
<a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1nIRlRgWD0c">http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1nIRlR gWD0c</a>

dude the first thing I said was it was just a poem about how aful I felt -at that moment -and in the poem I ended it being a girl was the couse ...isss juss poetry.

Ah, I completely misunderstood your reasons of writing.

LOL - my bad.

lol ...no my bad.

the poem is sweet. :)

and nice writing. (Y) thumbs up mate.

have a good one, and hope your feeling better about what ever upset you. :3

as we Aussies say time and time again;
"she'll be right."

Thanx! I do feel better.