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John Murray @beastkid7

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Posted by beastkid7 - June 21st, 2011


Idk if I'm good a writing ...but I like it so ama write sumor

Kat was was very fast. She ran down the city block stampeding threw the crowd. Shoving the money in her Jacket as bills flew into the cold air. She didn't think to look back, but she felt the presence of cops. The fuzz! She didn't know for certain so she dropt to the ground, into a sea of people. In her mind it was a disappearing act as she leaped into a wide ally way and rolled behind a dumpster. She pressed up against the brick wall in the most suspicious manner, looking left and then right, and then left again. Then sank down behind the disposal, fixed her red scarf, and began to count 'her' money. She began to whisper foul words he had only stolen one hundred and fifteen dollars. She sunk even farther down and stared at the opposite brick wall.

Then something happened that would change her story forever. She saw a boy on the other side of the ally, laying on the ground. She got up quickly in a spontaneous burst of energy and creeped over to him. He was steaming and the air around him was warm. Kat had noticed his full bodied suite was of fantastic design. It was skin tight, blue, black and silver in color. "Futuristic!" she thought, her eyes wide open. Looking at the shoulder latches and then radiator slits on the side of his chest. "Hey guy! ..Kid!" she shouted. No response. "Dude your literally smoken ...I don't know if its your suit or ..." She waited. Then she slowly reached down on bended knee in curiosity. The moment she touched his chest a shock shot up threw her arm. "ahha!" she streaked seeing only white. Quickly her sight faded back to see the boy standing up while she was on the ground. "What the hell?" She had never been so confused. "You are now capable of synching." he informed her as he reached out to help her up. "Lucky me." Kat said looking at him sarcastically. He stared back at her with a warm smile and a seemingly in human connection. "No it is I that is lucky." To him, she was a moving sight. Her haired flowed out her cap creating a wavy frame around her face. Dark peach colored skin rosey from the cold. And her eyes dark...seemed to reflect everything around it. "Okay..." she smirked, pulling her hand away, still stuck in his eyes.


Comments

Part of making comics or stories for that matter helps with assembling a "bulleted-list"

-Just list with dashes the events and dialogue that takes place.
-"Then you can piece and visualize the image and express it with more structure" said Jak.

Sometimes it takes re-writing the same piece over again a few times. But once it's done, it's done! And it's no longer forgotten. Also it's easier to backtrack.

Right! the plot outline Rising action, climax and what not ...plot twists

Thats some darn good advice Jak!! Specially that last part!

I'm gna try it