I liked it!
I really liked the music, the spectacle and the atmosphere. I'm a sucker for existentialism. have to agree with some people on the mellow dramatics though. ..even though, admittedly over dramatizing is actually a decent way of fully getting a point across, I would try a bit more subtlety next time. Funny this line right here--
"your corruption is your fault.
your corruption is your fault.
Not because you could chose not to be corrupt,
but because you have not given up on yourself."
lol thats a very blatant way of putting it. I mean ... the idea isn't to give up on yourself. I agree with it though .. supporting scriptures, very loosely quoted :P. ::Man was not ment to guide his own footsteps ..and Man has dominated man to his own injury.
Also, don't you think Hell is a bit out of character for a god who IS love? Think of it on a scale of infinite burning --to even a man who lived his whole life sinfully. Just close your eyes and scale that for a second. Even our puny man minds can realize the injustice in that. Sides, the word 'Hell' was used to translate several different original text words like Sheol, Hades, and Gehenna. Which all but Gehenna simply means grave ..Gehenna means the grave you won't com back from.
Looking at the reviews and responses. It's sad, the conundrum of different point of views. Two people honestly trying to help each other ..both looking at the other as sadly misguided.
Truth is, what is, not what you want. But, in a negation of perfection(Adam) ...imperfection. What we do want is not what we should want... is not what fulfills us. History proves it, present day proves it. We strive for things of fabricated value and perpetuate our own corruption.
But, alas, this is a review 7/10 because Propaganda is off putting and it was, as mentioned, very rigid, with all the tweening and what not. I liked it though, keep it up!